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    well i posted this in word play but i think it is better here,
    this is my first ever poem, so please read and tell me what you think (be nice)
    enjoy

    THE TRUTH.

    by Adam Brown

    Everybodyfails,
    Wewill all fall right down.
    Wewill all lust and cheat and steal,
    Wewill all tell a lie.
    Wewill all get hurt, be hurt and cause hurt.
    Asthis is what we are.

    Butthe most important thing,
    Thesecret to success;
    Islearning from that failure,
    It'scleaning up the mess.

    Wheneverything is broken,
    Whenthe future is looking grim.
    Stoopdown and fix what's broken,
    Facelife with a grin.

    'causein the end we're dying,
    Timeslowly ticks away.
    Ourtime on Earth is teeny,
    Andthe road is long and grey.
    Butwill we be forgotten?
    Whatevidence may be found?

    Toprove that we were decent,
    To sayour intentions were sound.

    Howwill we be remembered?
    Whenwe are six feet down,
    Belowthat dark, lonely mound?

    Theanswer is so simple,
    Yetmost cant see the truth.

    People,humans, our loveless, hateful kind,
    Willremember what we did in life,
    In These conclusions they will find,
    All ofour many failures.
    Andthat is just fine!

    'causein the end,
    Whenthat final trumpet sounds.
    Itsdoes not matter how people perceived us,
    Norhow our end was found.
    Whatmatters is the opinion of one holy godhead three in one.
    Onefather, one spirit, one all redeeming son.

    Gods'opinion is what matters,
    Itshim that holds all the cards.
    He isin absolute control,
    Godsgreatest gift to us is love.

    Heloves you more than you can even fathom,
    And heknows your EVERY fault,
    Everysingle dirty thought and act.
    Everytime you swore and lied, and cheated,
    Everytime you had a doubt.

    Butget this, it’s the best bit…….

    GODLOVES YOU ANYWAY.

    Sostop with all the hating!
    Throughdown all of your guns!
    Takeback all your hurtful, spiteful words!
    Andjust love God right back!



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    Wow, very insightful.

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    i agree with jamesla, i think it was nice

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    thank you


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    It's pretty good. Do you write poetry as a hobby or is it just this one?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Countergambit View Post
    It's pretty good. Do you write poetry as a hobby or is it just this one?
    yeah just that one...as i said at the start this is my first.


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    Default Re: poem, The truth

    I'm not religious, but this is great

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    im not "RELIGIOUS" either, im christian. and thanx


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    Quote Originally Posted by Adam_waz_here View Post
    im not "RELIGIOUS" either, im christian. and thanx
    AMEN! i'm a Christian too! great poem!

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